Re: Fan fiction Competition
Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2014 8:40 pm
The Fall of Five- Part one, 499 words not counting the parentheses and title
(I don't know if this is true or not, but I'm pretty sure it is lol. Plus it still counts if false, right ?)
The 5 warden captains and their brave warriors journeyed their way past Stonevale to the Otherworld portal. The captains were called Bloodstrike, Moonshadow, Greythorn, Loremantle, and Goldsong. Bloodstrike, strong and a natural leader, would run into battle, drawing the attention of monsters, while Moonshadow, the sneaky, deadly, and cunning, would sneak up from behind and assassinate them in a shower of stabs and slashes. Greythorn, the most versatile, shot mighty arrows which struck enemies from afar, and rarely ever missed. Loremantle, mysterious and powerful, shot burning bolts of fire, storms of blazing heat, and freezing ice from his hands. If one of the heroes were hurt, the peaceful Goldsong's nature magic would heal them immediately, and the heroes would fight on. Rarely anything stood a chance against the 5 warriors. In the past few days, they had reached the Otherworld.
Shield raised, he strode past the gate. Out of the darkness, the wardens saw a huge blue eye gliding towards them. Readying their weapons, casting their spells, Bloodstrike ran over and shield bashed the All Seeing One. Moonshadow jumped over and stabbed it right in the pupil, causing smoke to come out and impair it's vision. Greythorn shot arrows at the eye. Loremantle shot fire and ice straight at the mighty eye. Goldsong cast his blessings onto Bloodstrike. Then without warning, the Eye whirled around and swept the floor. Bloodstrike and Moonshadow rolled aside, but the other warriors attacking laid down, and were still. Then, it called for help. Shouting out a warcry, Bloodstrike caught the attention of the minions, and the 5 wardens continued attacking. Finally, the great eye fell out of the air, and lay on its side, dead.
The Wardens and the soldiers continued on, until they reached a swamp filled with water horses and dryads. Then, they saw- The Swamplord.
"Wait." A wizard walked up to the 5 wardens and gave Loremantle a scroll. "Many have failed trying to best this beast. I have made this bane for him, and you should try it against him."
Thanking the wizard, the wardens charged into battle again.
"Oi! Big donkey!" Bloodstrike shouted, taunting the Swamplord. The Swamplord charged forward, hitting him and causing him to hit the wall. Goldsong's nature magic healed Bloodstrike, and Loremantle read the words of the bane.
An invisible force struck the Swamplord, injuring it greatly. Turning its attention to Loremantle, it raised it's hooves and bought them down. Loremantle cast an energy shield around him, blocking the hit. Bloodstrike used this moment to flank the Swamplord, and stun it with a Shield Bash. Moonshadow jumped up and started slashing, stabbing, and rending the Swamplord. Then, it charged, knocking all but Greythorn to the floor. Shooting a bolas at it, Greythorn ran in circles while shooting arrows. Arrows pierced its throat, and the Swamplord gave an almighty lurch. It's body fell into the water. The Swamplord had fallen. If that had been the second challenge, they hated to think what would come next.
To be continued...
(I don't know if this is true or not, but I'm pretty sure it is lol. Plus it still counts if false, right ?)
The 5 warden captains and their brave warriors journeyed their way past Stonevale to the Otherworld portal. The captains were called Bloodstrike, Moonshadow, Greythorn, Loremantle, and Goldsong. Bloodstrike, strong and a natural leader, would run into battle, drawing the attention of monsters, while Moonshadow, the sneaky, deadly, and cunning, would sneak up from behind and assassinate them in a shower of stabs and slashes. Greythorn, the most versatile, shot mighty arrows which struck enemies from afar, and rarely ever missed. Loremantle, mysterious and powerful, shot burning bolts of fire, storms of blazing heat, and freezing ice from his hands. If one of the heroes were hurt, the peaceful Goldsong's nature magic would heal them immediately, and the heroes would fight on. Rarely anything stood a chance against the 5 warriors. In the past few days, they had reached the Otherworld.
Shield raised, he strode past the gate. Out of the darkness, the wardens saw a huge blue eye gliding towards them. Readying their weapons, casting their spells, Bloodstrike ran over and shield bashed the All Seeing One. Moonshadow jumped over and stabbed it right in the pupil, causing smoke to come out and impair it's vision. Greythorn shot arrows at the eye. Loremantle shot fire and ice straight at the mighty eye. Goldsong cast his blessings onto Bloodstrike. Then without warning, the Eye whirled around and swept the floor. Bloodstrike and Moonshadow rolled aside, but the other warriors attacking laid down, and were still. Then, it called for help. Shouting out a warcry, Bloodstrike caught the attention of the minions, and the 5 wardens continued attacking. Finally, the great eye fell out of the air, and lay on its side, dead.
The Wardens and the soldiers continued on, until they reached a swamp filled with water horses and dryads. Then, they saw- The Swamplord.
"Wait." A wizard walked up to the 5 wardens and gave Loremantle a scroll. "Many have failed trying to best this beast. I have made this bane for him, and you should try it against him."
Thanking the wizard, the wardens charged into battle again.
"Oi! Big donkey!" Bloodstrike shouted, taunting the Swamplord. The Swamplord charged forward, hitting him and causing him to hit the wall. Goldsong's nature magic healed Bloodstrike, and Loremantle read the words of the bane.
An invisible force struck the Swamplord, injuring it greatly. Turning its attention to Loremantle, it raised it's hooves and bought them down. Loremantle cast an energy shield around him, blocking the hit. Bloodstrike used this moment to flank the Swamplord, and stun it with a Shield Bash. Moonshadow jumped up and started slashing, stabbing, and rending the Swamplord. Then, it charged, knocking all but Greythorn to the floor. Shooting a bolas at it, Greythorn ran in circles while shooting arrows. Arrows pierced its throat, and the Swamplord gave an almighty lurch. It's body fell into the water. The Swamplord had fallen. If that had been the second challenge, they hated to think what would come next.
To be continued...